Gary Barringer feels too thin here

Looking just at Gary Barringer's work as Graphic Designer, there is a clear point of view in the performance. Several choices feel too broad for what the scene seems to require. The performance is functional, but it does not leave much after the scene ends. It is not a careless performance, but it feels under-shaped. The work never fully settles into the rhythm of the movie. Different viewers may value it more, but for me the effect was limited.