Mike Mayhall has flashes, but it wobbles

I came away thinking about Mike Mayhall's work as Writer more than I expected. Some scenes click, some just sit there. I would not call it bad, just not as sharp as it could have been. The quieter stuff works better than the bigger beats. It is solid enough, but there are moments where it feels a bit on autopilot. It is less about one scene and more about the overall aftertaste.